This post was written in response to Writing 101: Hone Your Point of View.
All the kids call Mrs. Pauley the witch of North End Road. I don’t know if she is a witch. She’s old enough to be one. Sheβs been here since before Mom was a kid.
Some of the kids say that she cursed her husband and turned him into a frog. I donβt believe in curses like that. Those things are for kids. But he has been gone for a while.
Sara said that the witch killed Mr. Pauley and thatβs why heβs not around. She thinks that the witch had to drink his blood to stay young. I donβt think she drank his blood. Thatβs vampires not witches. Besides if she drank his blood to stay young why does she have all those wrinkles?
I wouldnβt blame her if she did kill him. He was always yelling at me to be quiet. He popped my pool when I was a kid. Said it was on his yard so it was his.
Mom always took his side. Told me to stop bothering them because they were nice.
Yeah right. If they were nice then Iβd be able to have my pool under their tree. Itβs the only tree near our building. And if they were nice theyβd give out good candy on Halloween instead of those nasty molasses vomit things.
I wasn’t surprised when the cops came. Someone probably narked on her or something. It was crazy. There were police and Mr Scott, the landlord, he was there too.
I seen them when I was sitting on the steps. I was waiting for Jazz to get there so we could go do something. Sheβs always late.
I donβt know if the cops arrested her because they were quiet. I think if theyβre arresting someone they have to have the sirens on. Itβs a law or something.
I wanted to ask the cops what was going on but Mom said I had to stay by our steps. She told me not to get in the way.
I heard from Charlie, whose Dad is a cop, that she was being kicked out. He said that Mr Scott found out that she was a witch and didn’t want her there no more. I don’t blame him witches are scary evil.
Mom says we should feel sorry for the witch. She says the witch is just a poor widow whose family abandoned her.
I think I even heard Mom and Dad talking about letting her stay here. They said something about talking to the witchβs kids but I know thatβs not true. Everyone knows that witches canβt have kids.
I donβt know whatβs going to happen but if the witch stays here Iβm moving in with Jazz.
You hit your mark! LOL! It reminded me of the “great witch hunt” centuries ago. By the way, do you know why that ended? I can’t remember who the president was at that time but they started accusing his wife as being a witch. (Personally, I think someone was trying to prove their point that this whole thing was a farce).
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Thank you.
I actually didn’t know why the witch hunt ended. That is hilarious. I think they managed to make their point. π
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Wanted to let you know that the members of our Writing class are starting a Writers’ Blog. If you are interested in participating, go to The Commons for more information.
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Thank you for letting me know. I’m just checking it out now. π
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I love this take on the prompt! Most other people seemed to do a poor old dear kind character for Mrs. Pauley, it never even crossed my mind to make her the evil old lady at the end of the road. Great story!
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Thank you. I’ll be honest the idea came to me while buying Halloween candy and passing those horrible candies. If not for that I probably would have pitied Mrs Paulet as well. π
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Well done. You stayed true to the character throughout the piece. And I like that last line. Great ending.
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Thank you π
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Oh you really got into the mind of a 12 year old. Off to read some of your other posts. π
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Thank you. π
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